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Blockhed13



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PostSubject: I want to help you   Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:48 am

First of all, I'm just going to flat out say it, but your story is awful. I'm sorry, but it is. But before you hit 'ban,' let me get to the real reason why I'm posting. I, like you, am a fan fiction writer. This isn't any sort of self advertising bull (because I hate people like that, but I may inadvertently do it,) I made the same mistakes as you did (and I'm still guilty of it today,) but get every chapter proof-read by someone else (like me, for example,) before you post it online. I can give you some tips for now, but no more until someone responds.

-When doing a crossover, try to stick to two stories. It keeps the story in order and doesn't lose your readers in the text. Doing three or more stories in a crossover is a bit tricky, and you have to know what you're doing. Otherwise, you get all the trolls on your tail.

-Like I said, get this proof-read before you post it. And use spell check.

-Check your tenses! There are past tenses (like 'I did this') and present tenses (like 'I am doing this')

If you want to quickly contact me, you can contact me via deviantart (which is Blockhed13 as well) or fanfiction(dot)net and look up Blockhed13

Keep following your passion, and don't let any stupid trolls get in your way. Keep writing!

-Blockhed13
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PostSubject: Re: I want to help you   Wed Feb 08, 2012 7:53 pm

NO.
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DarK KnIgHt CeciL

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PostSubject: Re: I want to help you   Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:47 pm

I second it. GRRRRR
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PostSubject: Re: I want to help you   Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:10 pm

why do uo say these things to dally she is not INTERNENTED CAN YOU NOT SEE
She is a bootyful righter and should be given tonnes of awards and grannys for her story!!
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