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High and Violet Hiei

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PostSubject: Chapter 18... Hm =/   Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:17 pm

I'm sorry, Dally. I love you, I do, but I feel like I was disappointed in the latest chapter.

It's not like your earlier chapters. I wanted to know what happened to Dumbledore and did everyone get mad at Harry for letting him get away?

And... this chapter was so random. Where did it come from? =[ It's not as well written as your previous chapters either.

I is a sad pufferfish. Sad

What do you guys think?
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 18... Hm =/   Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:03 pm


I thought they were oakaki, but Dallaly skipped to a new year, and we dun know what happened with Dummumbledoree, Mistrique, and Edwarted. It was hard to underfund. Sad

Also, not trooing to be racist, but why is Maurer black? I don't think it makes sentances. Neutral

Hopefully Dally's next chappy wul b much bettar. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 18... Hm =/   Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:57 am

i do luv dally and everythin and i luv everyrthing she does

but i just want another chap with Dumble, Mustique, and Edwarf. and of coarse Dally and her gangbang
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 18... Hm =/   Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:02 pm

dalle went throug a vary tramatic experiance so she prolley wanted a new start for her life as well as well her work that is the fts
also the diabetas probibly also made her some slightly amonesia i herd that hanpens in dogs o maybe homans as well

or mayb its just a flesh foreword like in lost u know_?
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