|High and Violet Hiei|
Posts : 30
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 25
Location : Slytherin/Hagrid's House
|Subject: Chapter 18... Hm =/ Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:17 pm|| |
I'm sorry, Dally. I love you, I do, but I feel like I was disappointed in the latest chapter.
It's not like your earlier chapters. I wanted to know what happened to Dumbledore and did everyone get mad at Harry for letting him get away?
And... this chapter was so random. Where did it come from? =[ It's not as well written as your previous chapters either.
I is a sad pufferfish.
What do you guys think?
|Cry Like Onions|
Posts : 36
Join date : 2010-06-03
Age : 19
Location : Harry's tears of Onions
|frantic rush of hurry|
Posts : 82
Join date : 2010-05-08
Location : the queerest of all stores....Holster
|Subject: Re: Chapter 18... Hm =/ Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:57 am|| |
i do luv dally and everythin and i luv everyrthing she does
but i just want another chap with Dumble, Mustique, and Edwarf. and of coarse Dally and her gangbang
Posts : 331
Join date : 2009-08-05
Location : undies clothes
|Subject: Re: Chapter 18... Hm =/ Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:02 pm|| |
dalle went throug a vary tramatic experiance so she prolley wanted a new start for her life as well as well her work that is the fts
also the diabetas probibly also made her some slightly amonesia i herd that hanpens in dogs o maybe homans as well
or mayb its just a flesh foreword like in lost u know_?
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