k so there are some points taht bug me/ are funny but aren't my favorite parts of the story or anything lik that... such as this
"they had switched there location to Chicago and were at a broadway musical"
I didn't know there was a Broadwy street in Chicago.
I don't know why it bugged me exactly... I guess my artsy side believe she should have just said musical...
and the fact that she automatically assumed she could find dumbledore there was extremely insulting, as if ONLY homosexual people like musicals.