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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:35 pm

I can honestly speak on behalf of about 10 people.
We would be tumors is the spelling changed Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:47 pm

DallysWheelCheese wrote:
I can honestly speak on behalf of about 10 people.
We would be tumors is the spelling changed Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
The number is much greater than 10.
My name would also be obsolete if the story is edited.

To whomever started this thread,

What you are doing right now is cruel. It's crueler than what we're doing. We love Dally and we love her story because of the way it is. I get that you're trying to help her English, I do. I also get the impression that you're very bothered by the language that Dally has created, and, initially, so was I.
But what you're doing now is hurting Dally's feelings and Dally's fanbase. We love Dally's story for the everyone-loves-Dally-plot and for the incessant errors (in case you haven't noticed.) That's why we're here. If you keep pressuring Dally to go back and "fix" her story (and yes, I think it's perfect the way it is), there are going to be quite a few people who leave.
Before you say you don't care, consider this; in Dally's story, FaCe ThE sTrAnGe, almost every single male character has a crush or is in love with Dally. You yourself have said that you take this as a sign that Dally is lonely and wishes people loved her. Well, here we are and we love Dally. Do you really want us to go away? Dally says she used to cut herself. Do you want her to go back to that? Do you want to hurt someone that you don't even know because you didn't like the way something was written?
I couldn't live with myself if I did that. That's selfish. If you don't like Dally's story, don't come in here and rag on it.
Get the fuck out.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:54 pm

ThatFaggotDumbledumdore wrote:
mounted in unicorns wrote:
Wait... what? fuck you guys. No one's that funny without trying. What the fucks with the seriousness in here. Just let Dally remain Dally. Whatever kind of enigma she is.

I think the word you're looking for is "eginam", like Shadow, bless his soul...
R.I.P Shadow. He was a true eginam.

Also, what Pain said. IF YOU DON'T ENJOY DALLY'S STORY THEN KINDLY REMOVE YOURSELF FROM THIS FORUM. We don't need your nitpicky asshattery and we certainly don't need you.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 4:57 pm

... I love that nickname. The other Pain and Sufferage should be Sufferage, no?
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:27 pm

FUCK YOU ASS HOLE!!! STOP TRYING TO BRING DALLY DOWN, THIS IS THE BEST FAN FICTION TO EVER BE WRITTEN AND I, AS ONE OF HER THOUSANDS OF FANS WOULD BE ABSOLUTELY CRUSHED IF SHE STARTED CHANGING THE WAY SHE WRITES FOR ONE ARROGANT ASSHOLE! KEEP IT REAL, DALLY!
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:30 pm

I don't think you should "correct" the way you write.
The story is PERFECT the way it is.
Your typos and stuff add originallity and some humor to the story.
Please don't go back and change the story that we all love so much. D':

By the way, I can't wait for the next chapter! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 8:51 pm

Don't listen to em Dally! It's a TARP!
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 9:45 pm

I think it's funny at the fact when we all started to disagree with him, he hasn't been to the topic... at least hasn't replied to any of it. I mean, I don't even recall seeing him logged on after this. Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:55 pm

Dally, Dally, Dally. LISTEN TO ME. LISTEN TO THE FANS.

DO NOT LISTEN TO THE GUY'S CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. HE'S A SPOILSPORT.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:56 pm

BritneyBritofldw wrote:
Dally, Dally, Dally. LISTEN TO ME. LISTEN TO THE FANS.

DO NOT LISTEN TO THE GUY'S CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. HE'S A SPOILSPORT.
Haven't heard that one in YEARS
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:57 pm

AIGHT wrote:
I think it's funny at the fact when we all started to disagree with him, he hasn't been to the topic... at least hasn't replied to any of it. I mean, I don't even recall seeing him logged on after this. Shocked
Our words hit him where it hurt, obv.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:58 pm

He Was Tumors wrote:
AIGHT wrote:
I think it's funny at the fact when we all started to disagree with him, he hasn't been to the topic... at least hasn't replied to any of it. I mean, I don't even recall seeing him logged on after this. Shocked
Our words hit him where it hurt, obv.
Yeah, for serious, maybe he's cutting himself lolololololololololol
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Mon Jul 20, 2009 4:16 pm

AIGHT wrote:
Tumors wrote:
It's really impregnate to me that you don't change a damn thing, Dally. After all, we love it for it's imperfections. One could argue that your story is so imperfect that it IS perfect.

Ignore the party shitters correcting you and keep up the gr8 work. I don't know what I would fap to if you quit writing.
AMEN TO DAT
-FAP FAP FAP FAP FAP FAP FAP-
AMEN TO DAT TOO
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:53 am




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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:22 pm

STFU GTFO!!

Leave Dally alone! Ya DOUCHE!
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:46 pm

This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:25 pm

Pain and Sufferage wrote:
This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
Hahaha! Total win!
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:38 pm

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Pain and Sufferage wrote:
This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
Hahaha! Total win!
Thnx bby Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:39 pm

Pain and Sufferage wrote:
Edwarf wrote:
Pain and Sufferage wrote:
This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
Hahaha! Total win!
Thnx bby Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:50 pm

Pain and Sufferage wrote:
This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
Oh Bby.
I liek it wen u talk dirrty.
... lets forgt te sandpappry tho.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:39 am

Pain_and_Sufferage wrote:
Pain and Sufferage wrote:
This isn't constructive criticism. This is grammar naziism.
If you were giving constructive criticism, you would be trying to tell dally nicely to proofread it.
The typos are what makes entertaining for most of us. You don't have to read it.
So, fuck you. Fuck you with something hard and sandpapery.
Oh Bby.
I liek it wen u talk dirrty.
... lets forgt te sandpappry tho.
Okay Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:39 am

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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:16 am

Dumbles Long White Bear wrote:
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Shut up douche bag D:<
It is perfect the way it is!
GTFO Mad
I agree! Jesus Christ.

Some people just can't appreciate good literature. Evil or Very Mad
o i no rite? Evil or Very Mad
some ppl...
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:32 pm

Dally wrote:
umm this was hard to read didnt get all the way thrju...

but i will lock ovarie it again and fix chapttr wan ... it will take a while prolly cuz ts on this and also onn my webs accunt but i will try fixin it...

i know grammer and spellin in impregnant to fans so i will do that. wait lemme put up a update on this

theres no "fixing" to be done. your work is great.

dont change it one bit.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive Criticism   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:41 pm

Dally! Don't change anything! Remember, spellcheck can give you horrid STDs. It's scientifically proven.

We all love your story, just the way it is.
You know, one girl even died from using spellcheck. I knew her. Poor thing didn't have a chance.
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