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PostSubject: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:43 pm

Your later chapters seem A LOT different than your earlier ones.

IDK How to explain it, but...they do. Did you have a friend proofread/edit for you? Mayhaps that bitch Charla?

Have you lost your motivation to write? Does anyone else notice this? I mean, I'm not complaining, just simply making an observation.
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Thu Sep 24, 2009 2:10 am

Well she is in high school, she might of learned a few techniques from the English class. Other then that, IDK.
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Tue Sep 29, 2009 5:55 pm

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Well she is in high school, she might of learned a few techniques from the English class. Other then that, IDK.
Last time I checked, Techniques made you better, Not even worse.
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:29 am

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Well she is in high school, she might of learned a few techniques from the English class. Other then that, IDK.
Last time I checked, Techniques made you better, Not even worse.
It was actually better then what it was in the earlier chapters. If you read it again you will see the difference. First chapter was "lulz this is failure," and the recent chapter, there is less mistakes and looks like it was intentionally put in. Please for the love of of WhatsHisName you paid attention. /:
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:05 pm

The mistakes DO seem more intentional, actually. It's sad. ;[
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:21 pm

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The mistakes DO seem more intentional, actually. It's sad. ;[

It sucked in general. You can tell that in the last chapters she just didn't care, though.
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PostSubject: Re: D-dally...? I have some questionable questions.   Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:47 am

HAI, U, ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Shut the fuck up.
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