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IluvDally



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PostSubject: I FOUND IT   Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:20 pm

I totally found a line that was like not filled with typos and stuff.
“How will we do that? we killed Snape remember? And his dick,” said Sasuke.
Look only one mistake. But we like can't all be perfect.
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:59 am

yes, perfection makes defection, thats what i use to say. oh but waht its the mistake is the uncapitalized w or is it the comma after dick?
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:58 am

Bean Gay wrote:
yes, perfection makes defection, thats what i use to say. oh but waht its the mistake is the uncapitalized w or is it the comma after dick?

The comma is correct the w needs to be capitalized.
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:48 pm

Only one grammatical error, yes, but it's still a big mistake, from a perspective of writing.

You don't generally want to remind the audience of things in such an obvious way, because this comes off as thinking that the audience is stupid.
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Fri Dec 11, 2009 9:26 am

I'm so proud of Dally, so almost utilized the English language in an acceptable manner. Maybe, if we all believe in her, there will be more coherent sentences to come from her. Flow on Dally, flow on.
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:29 pm

but i lurv the way dally writes.. the silly mistakes make my days
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PostSubject: Re: I FOUND IT   Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:27 pm

The Next Ritalin wrote:
but i lurv the way dally writes.. the silly mistakes make my days
Quote for TRUTH!!!!!!!
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